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Post by Bumblebee~* on Sat May 22, 2010 8:36 pm

Alright, here's my first shot at drawing warriors (my first REAL attempt -_-) on MS Paint.

I'm reading Bluestar's Prophecy, and I'm almost finished... so I decided I would draw her.

In this picture, she's supposed to be worrying about Oakheart and her future with him. The largest star represents Moonflower, while the slightly smaller one is Snowfur.

Feel free to critique.



Sorry... I think the quality kind of died along with it... =P
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Post by .:Jaywing:. on Sat May 22, 2010 8:38 pm

Nice!
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Post by Bumblebee~* on Sat May 22, 2010 9:12 pm

Thanks. I did it in like... 5 - 10 minutes... I wasn't sure what else to do with it. XD
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Post by kiwiattack on Sat May 22, 2010 10:01 pm

:-D I loved Bluestar's Prophecy, it's my favorite of all the Warriors books.

Okay, you asked for critique, so here I go:

The only thing I really notice is the anatomy. It's really good for your first time, but there are still several problems. The head is a bit too big for the body, and the shoulder seems to be fused with the chest. There are other wonky bits too. Too learn better animal anatomy, I suggest looking at tutorials (there are several on DeviantART that could help). There are also some really good books out there. One of my favorites is How to Draw Animals by Jack Hamm. One thing I WOULD NOT recommend though is looking at any books or tutorials that just teach you to draw an animal in a certain pose. The best way to learn anatomy is to learn what's under the skin.

Cool job on the eye btw. :3
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Post by Bumblebee~* on Sat May 22, 2010 10:09 pm

Yeah, I've been having a bit of trouble with that. I draw manga people on paper alot, and I guess I'm used to having the head a bit larger than proportions allow (Did that make sense?). I only just started reading and drawing warrior cats, but thanks for the tips, I'll keep an eye out for good tutorials. =]

Thanks! I don't think the whites of her eyes are supposed to show though... XD
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Post by kiwiattack on Sat May 22, 2010 10:20 pm

Yeah, they usually don't on most animals. I always let the whites show though.
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Post by Swiftfire the nz Pac-man on Sun May 23, 2010 12:36 am

It looks AWESOME!!!
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Post by Bumblebee~* on Sun May 23, 2010 12:54 am

Thanks! Any suggestions? ^w^
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Post by Member on Sun May 23, 2010 11:01 am

Don'ty give the cats hair styles. It's really stupid looking...

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Post by kiwiattack on Sun May 23, 2010 2:38 pm

Memblerber wrote:Don'ty give the cats hair styles. It's really stupid looking...

I SUPPORT THIS MESSAGE.
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Post by Bumblebee~* on Mon May 24, 2010 12:36 am

Yeah, you told me that on the chatbox, Mem. And Kiwi, I already gave my reason for the "stupid hairstyle". I wasn't going to have it in the first place but it looks even stupider without it.
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Post by Swiftfire the nz Pac-man on Mon May 24, 2010 2:31 am

Good point =D
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Post by Bumblebee~* on Mon May 24, 2010 2:34 am

Another thing Kiwi, you told me you were fine with it and that lots of talented artists use it. You just think they look like "emo bangs". So what's up with the backtracking? This is just my opinion, but I don't mind it. Lots of the traits we draw on them don't exist. Please don't hate on that part, I'm asking for tips on how to improve, not for flaming on a "stupid hairstyle". =]
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Post by Member on Mon May 24, 2010 6:47 am

Oh, I know I did, I just wasn't sure if you saw it or not. XD

I think what Kiwi is saying that a lot of talented artists put bangs on their cats, but she's not fond of it, and thinks they're emo bangs.

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Post by Wolvine on Mon May 24, 2010 10:00 am

xD It depends what jur doin. Its fun if your doing a comic and put hair on them to add to humanish things..
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Post by Bumblebee~* on Mon May 24, 2010 12:17 pm

I know what she's saying. And she's said it already, but now she's acting like she genuinely hates them.

Yehh. X3
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Post by kiwiattack on Mon May 24, 2010 2:52 pm

Honeycloud wrote:I know what she's saying. And she's said it already, but now she's acting like she genuinely hates them.

Yehh. X3

I don't hate them, I just don't like them, at all. I think they look dumb, but I'm fine with some artists using them, I just think that it makes their pictures look worse.

I'm not attacking you, I understand what you said about thinking the forehead looked too big. Also, the degree of the 'hair' on your picture wasn't too bad. It was little, it was not 'emo bangs' as I so affectionately call them. X3
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Post by Bumblebee~* on Mon May 24, 2010 2:54 pm

... but if I draw Joykit she has to have emo bangs. Cuz she's emo. ;D
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Post by kiwiattack on Mon May 24, 2010 3:05 pm

Well then that makes sense. :-D
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Post by Bumblebee~* on Mon May 24, 2010 3:06 pm

Warriors art shouldn't make sense. XP Unless you're drawing for a bio like Kiwiifruitehh.
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