Hazelspirit of Shadowclan

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Hazelspirit of Shadowclan

Post by Cheesles on Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:58 pm

Name: Hazelspirit
Gender: Female
Age: 15 moons
Affiliate: Shadowclan
Rank: Medicine Cat

Looks: Green eyes and instead of missing left [or right?] foreleg, she has a injured left hind leg. It was broken in a badger attack. But isn't missing.


Personality: Hazelspirit is a very timid young she cat. She is brave, strong hearted and loyal. She can be a little decisive and was supposed to have been a fantastic warrior, because of her ability and strength.

Hazelspirit is determined and very friendly, she almost seems to never stop talking. She loves kit, although they are not her favorite patients because of their stubbornness. But with a little honey, she can make all the herbs go down with ease.

Hazelspirit can be a little stubborn herself. She refused to except that after her injury, she wouldn't be a warrior. But when she was given the option to stay in the medicine den and learn about more herbs, she eagerly jumped at the chance, the cold truth has sucken in, but Hazelspirit did except it.

Birth: Clan

History: Born in the clan, Hazelkit was reared by a kind mother that devoted her life to the kit, Hazelkit being her only one. This devotion showed when Minnowfoot, [the mother] through away her own life to save her 3 moon old kits in a territfeing battle with a badger that Hazelkit with a badly broken leg.

Just before what would've been her apprentice ceremony, and after 3 moons on lying in a nest for hours on end, Hazelkit was told she would never be able to become a proper warrior. Devastated Hazelkit watched as her fellow kits were made apprentices, she trained with them trying to learn everthing but eventually the truth began to sink in.

With much reluctance Hazelkit, now 7 moons decided that she would become a medicine cat, as she had learnt much while recovering in the den.

After many moons trianing more devastation struck, when Hazelpaws mentor was kidnapped and then later found with her throat slashed, obviously from another cat.

This came as a magger set back to Hazelpaw training but after a moon, she went to the medicine cats meeting and was made a full medicine cat at the age of thirteen moons.


RP Sample: Hazelkit looked up, the blinding sun chasing away in chance of a visual on the badger she could have. She scrambled back as she felt a huge thump through the earth as the badger lumbered towards her. She tried to scramble out of its way but instead got further into the middle of it. "Help!" She yelped.

Hazelkit looked around, her eyes wide with fear. She could make out the grey bark of a near by tree. She hobbled towards it and scrambled into the branches. "Help me! Somebody, HELP MEEEE!!!!" Her squeal echoed through the trees. But no doubt that a Shadowclan cat wouldn't hear. She could see through the canopy, the badger lumbering around trying to find her.

It paused, ugly snout in the air. It turned, looking blindly in her direction. IT started slow, quietly walking towards her, but it pace quickened and became a loud gallop. Surely someone would have heard that? She thought desperately.

Then Hazelkit realised what was happening. She clung to the branch she had scrambled onto but it was too late. The badger slammed into the trunk with everything it had. The trunk cracked and began to fall. Hazelkit was thrown clear and landed right behind the badger.

It turned, and instantly grabbed her hind leg, crunching down hard. "AHHH!" Was Hazelkits terrified scream. The badger began to shake it heads, still with her leg in its grasp. blood poured from the wound on to the ground, splattering the dry dusty forest floor crimson.

A yowl came from the surrounding bush as a grey tabby she cat through herself at the badger. She landed on its back, perfectly. "Mother!" Hazelkit yowled weakly. The she cat dug in its claws. The badger let go of Spiritkit and she was slamed into a boulder.

"Mother..." She mewed weakly. The last she saw was the badger pinning her mother to the ground, and biting savagely into her throat.


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Re: Hazelspirit of Shadowclan

Post by Riber~ on Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:26 am

...You never mentioned why she doesn't have a leg...
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Re: Hazelspirit of Shadowclan

Post by Member on Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:07 am

Yuh...

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Re: Hazelspirit of Shadowclan

Post by Amberstorm on Fri Jul 02, 2010 1:19 pm

Yes, she did. Though she forgot something, it clearly says that she broke her leg in a badger fight that her mother died in.
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Post by Member on Fri Jul 02, 2010 1:26 pm

Just because it's broken doesn't mean it's missing completely...

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Re: Hazelspirit of Shadowclan

Post by Amberstorm on Fri Jul 02, 2010 1:48 pm

Oh. O.O It's missing completely? Jeez, Cheese, this isn't the vet's office! There's no way it could have cleanly come off in the wild! What, are you crazy?
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Post by Riber~ on Fri Jul 02, 2010 2:57 pm

I suppose she could have born like that.
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Re: Hazelspirit of Shadowclan

Post by Amberstorm on Fri Jul 02, 2010 3:00 pm

Oh. Right. That's another possibility.
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Re: Hazelspirit of Shadowclan

Post by Cheesles on Fri Jul 02, 2010 3:47 pm

No, I didn't say it was missing...

Imma edit that, make it more, clear...
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Post by Amberstorm on Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:38 pm

Aha! See? I knew she never wrote down that the leg was missing...
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Re: Hazelspirit of Shadowclan

Post by Cheesles on Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:52 pm

Onto the more important topic, ish it approved?
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Re: Hazelspirit of Shadowclan

Post by Noname on Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:05 pm

Why'd you make the RP sample, trying to show off that you finally learned how to RP? *applauds Cheese* Good show!

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Re: Hazelspirit of Shadowclan

Post by Cheesles on Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:07 pm

No actually I just copied and pasted from the rough bio I made to try out for it. XD But yeah I learnt how to rp pretty well now! =3
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