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Post by Cheesles Sun Jul 11, 2010 9:49 pm

... Art I did this morning... 29u43l


Did this, this morning, its a new charrie I'm going to make for this other site, critique appreciated...
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Post by Mosspaw Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:21 am

I'd recommend not having all of the edges blackened, only the ones in the back. In most of the wolf/dog art i've seen where it's looking up, it's looking at the moon, so the front of the head/chest would be normal, where the back would be darkened.
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Post by Bumblebee~* Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:32 am

I agree with Mosspaw. For once. Prolly never happen again... but yes, I agree with Mosspaw.

And she looks very... feline. Also, if you have female characters, try to give her a more feminine look. Not neccesarily eyelashes and stuff like that, but you can also use more delicate features... a more slender, graceful pose, etc.

But it's pree good! :DD
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Post by Wolvine Mon Jul 12, 2010 10:14 am

Mmmm.... Yesh. The eyes seems rather masculine. Its a bit bold. Maybe try slimming it a little bit, using thiner lines?
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Post by Mosspaw Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:21 pm

Haha I disagree with Wolverine for once, or... yeah. I think that you should use thicker lines, with that same style.

((Haha I know the boundaries of MS paint))
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Post by Bumblebee~* Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:26 pm

Those lines are already the thinnest they can go. X3

But maybe you should use slightly thicker brush around the eyes? The features themselves need to be more feminine, and maybe not as sharp as a male's.
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Post by Waffletail Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:54 pm

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Post by Bumblebee~* Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:58 pm

*snickers* Shtupid, shtupid Waffley.
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Post by kiwiattack Tue Jul 13, 2010 2:37 pm

ALRIGHT LET'S DO THIS.

Okay, the first thing I notice is the border around the wolf. It looks like you just ran the airbrush tool over the edges. It may be shading, it may be decorative, I can't tell. If it is shading, it's really off. Things don't just get dark around the edges. And the lightsource would be very inconsistant. If it's just a decorative border I really don't think it adds anything to the overall image. It's a little confusing.

I disagree with everyone else about making it more feminine. X3 I could tell it was female even without knowing the name. Making the lines around the eyes thicker would look like eyelashes. >< Making the eyes themselves thinner, in my opinion would just make it look more masculine.

ANATOMY! This picture (not trying to be rude, honest) shows very little understanding of wolf/dog anatomy. I recommend looking at pictures of wolves, muscle structure of wolves, anything that would help you learn the underworkings of such a creature.I am by NO MEANS an expert on the subject, I'm still learning myself. ><
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Post by Cheesles Tue Jul 13, 2010 3:42 pm

No offense, I didn't understand a word of that really XD. I don't know why I put the airbrush around it, and thank you for saying it looks feminine and the last bit, no offense but I don't want to be a freak about drawing, I don't want to be a genius about every single inch and stuff, I just want to draw like I do.
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Post by ~ Jetter ~ Tue Jul 13, 2010 3:46 pm

Cheesles wrote: critique appreciated...

Well its what you ask them to do and thats what they did. *points to all of the posts*
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Post by Cheesles Tue Jul 13, 2010 4:06 pm

Your right, but I didn't want that sort of complicated stuff. No offence kiwi, honestly, I'm just voicing my opinion.. =3
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Post by kiwiattack Tue Jul 13, 2010 4:20 pm

Cheesles wrote:No offense, I didn't understand a word of that really XD. I don't know why I put the airbrush around it, and thank you for saying it looks feminine and the last bit, no offense but I don't want to be a freak about drawing, I don't want to be a genius about every single inch and stuff, I just want to draw like I do.

The WHOLE POINT of critique is so you can get better. If you don't want to get better, then don't ask. >I


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Post by Amberstorm Tue Jul 13, 2010 7:01 pm

*agrees with Kiwi*
WOW! We should pal up some time. XD *grabs tablet*
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Post by Bumblebee~* Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:55 pm

... *PWNches Amber* Whoops. Bad aim. ^^;

ANYWAYS. Cheese, let me dumb it down for you.

By "the border around the wolf", she means the airbrush tool that you surrounded the wolf with. We don't know if it's shading or a drawing style, but shadows don't go all around the edges of something.

The light is coming from the moon right? And she's looking at the moon? Yeah... the shadows wouldn't be on her face. That's what she means by "inconsistent lighting".

And well... if the airbrush is just for decoration, it doesn't add much to the picture. In our opinion. It's cool if it's your style, but it doesn't really do much for the picture.

And the feminine thing... well... I still think she looks like a male. XD

Anatomy... like the structure of the wolf. I suck at it too, so yeah. Look at pictures of wolves... muscle structure... skeletal structure... and stuff. Your picture doesn't say "wolf" at first glance, so just work on studying how wolves actually look like.


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Post by Amberstorm Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:11 am

What did I do? D:
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Post by Bumblebee~* Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:12 am

Everything. Wrong. Tsk. *huggles Amber* And I have bad aim. X3
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Post by Amberstorm Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:27 am

*cries and slaps money into hand* GO LEARN HOW TO AIM PROPERLY AND DON'T SPEND IT ON BUBBLEGUM! D<
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Post by Bumblebee~* Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:31 am

*takes money* Heh. >D *runs away*
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Post by Cheesles Fri Jul 16, 2010 12:58 am

... Art I did this morning... 2yv31mr

More this is Pinefrost and Bluesong
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Post by Bumblebee~* Fri Jul 16, 2010 1:20 am

Awweh, the cloud in the middle is shaped like a heart. :3
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Post by Cheesles Fri Jul 16, 2010 1:22 am

I am trying to get better at doing backgrounds and stuff...
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Post by Amberstorm Fri Jul 16, 2010 2:01 am

OMG! The cloud IS shaped like a heart! XD
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Post by kiwiattack Fri Jul 16, 2010 11:13 pm

It is. <3 I'm still bad at BGs. D:
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