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Scarpaw.

Post by Scareyes on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:14 pm

Name:Scarpaw
Gender: male
Age: 6 moons
Affiliate: darkclan
Rank:
apprentice

Looks:Scarpaw is already big for his age and was even
big at birth, solid black with forest green eyes and big shoulders.
Scarpaw has big paws with very sharp claws having sharpened them every
day. his most distinguished features are two large scars that start at
the top of his eyes and go down to the bottom of his chin. powerful in
body he is surprisingly agile in combat but is slow when it comes to
straight dashes.
Personality Scarpaw is a calm calculating cat with a
hunger for fighting, He would be the first to dive into a fight and
would probably need other of his clan to hold him back. Quick to the
claws and slow to the words Scarpaw is going to make a quick name for
himself as a brutal fighter who refuses to quit. Ambitious not so much
for leader but to be the most dominate fighter in all clans.


Birth:clanborn

History:Scarpaw was born from a rouge cat who had wandered into Darkclan territory, She was found and taken back to camp where she had 4 kittens sadly the other 3 died along with there mother but Scar was too strong even as a kit he showed signs of strength, As a kit Scarpaw was a troublemaker getting into fights with cat's twice his size he soon made a name for himself as a ferocious fighter. A lot of the anger came from some of the apprentices telling him he wasn't a real clan cat which set's him off quickly, One day he wanted to prove himself two his clan and snuck out into the hunting grounds to catch some prey for the elders. While he was out he ran into a badger den and stuck his head in never having anyone tell him not two he was greeted by a powerful claw that came down and sliced two big scars from the top of his eyes down to his chin, Scarpaw which before then he was known as blackkit because of his dark fur ran back after being tended to by the medicine cat who was glad to say he wouldn't lose his eyes he was dubbed scarkit as a warning to the other kit's to stay away from dangerous areas. Scarkit has just reached his 6th moon and can't wait to be apprenticed the whole question was who was his teacher.

RP Sample:Blackit looked around the dark camp his keen eyes searching here and there as he made sure no one could see him, he slipped out of the den and passed some shrubs vanishing in there soft green leaves that felt good on his spine, Blackit was a good size kit for his age even though he was only 4 moons old he almost matched the size of some of the larger apprentices. His Iceberg blue eyes searched the other side before he dashes out of the shrub and past the night watch who were intent on talking instead of being weary, He was on a self made mission to show the apprentices he was a clan cat and no one was going to say he wasn't.

Blackit slipped through the night looking up at the large full moon that gave adequate light with a flick of his ear he searched for some sound, His nose whiffed the air as he smelt something a vole off at the edges of a large sycamore, Blackit slunk forward his body pressed against the ground sliding his paws so the Vole wouldn't here him coming. Blackit slid his tongue over his sharp teethe as he moved up on a medium size rock above the vole and with a leap he landed claws extended as they sunk into the vole's soft body and with a bite he ripped the throat open killing the prey. Blackit lifted the vole up his eyes shining with triumph before he heard a noise a large huffing back and forth from a small den a few paces away, Blackit dropped the vole and walked forward as he stuck his head in his eyes widened as a large paw slammed down his face. He could feel the powerful claws slipping into his flesh and ripping down with a jerk the claw's narrowly missed his eyes but the continued down his face to his chin.

Blackit mrrowed in pain and shot off leaving the vole as blood splotches shot off the kittens face as he ran full sprint into the Darkclan camp he was immediately set upon by a warrior who rushed him to the medicine cat, Blackit was put to sleep with a herb he was told to chew and a odd seed that took the pain away Blackit woke up looking through some cobwebs the sun was high possibly noonish the strong young kitten walked out only to be set upon by the leader who had called a meeting Blackit was punished to the elders den to take care of them and was dubbed scarkit as his new name as a warning to any other kit who dared to leave the camp.


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Re: Scarpaw.

Post by Noname on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:17 pm

Pretty good. Approved.
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Re: Scarpaw.

Post by LEN KAGAMINE on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:22 pm

Sempai, it can't be approved yet. A cat cannot be black with blue eyes without being blind. -points to Hollowglare- There's an example. Other than that, I'd say it was a good bio. x3 Just change the eye color.
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Re: Scarpaw.

Post by Noname on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:25 pm

*smacks Len with paper fan* WHY I OUTTA!
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Re: Scarpaw.

Post by LEN KAGAMINE on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:26 pm

-smacked with paper fan-

;-;

I was just saying. The eye color has to change.
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Re: Scarpaw.

Post by Noname on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:33 pm

APPROVED! And MOVED!
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Re: Scarpaw.

Post by Riber~ on Mon Jul 19, 2010 11:58 am

LEN KAGAMINE wrote:
-smacked with paper fan-

;-;

I was just saying. The eye color has to change.


It's possible actually.
A black cat with blue eyes.
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Re: Scarpaw.

Post by Member on Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:21 pm

Yeah, as long as it's not a kit...

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