evil loner nightmare

Name: Nightmare
Gender:female
Affiliate: Rogue but goes anywhere she wants.
Rank:None
Looks:Ok she is two feet taller than a normal wolf.Her tail reachs the ground, than a inch of it drags on the ground.Ice blue eyes like Scourge's.Her claws are normal size for her.

Her bloodline is made up of tall demon like wolves.Ok the reason is a long time ago there where two wolves that had chemicals tested on them they fell in love.Than there's her bloodline.
Personality: She is very hateful.She never liked other creatures, if something won't move out of her way She always will try to kill it.If a small group ganged on her she'll most likely make quick work of him.Though if a big group where to she would run, away trying to lose them by with speed,and sharp turns.
Birth: Rogue
History:she was born far from every thing,yet wandered as a pup.she found herself near the clan territories and stayed there.noone knows much about her though.she will most likely go to nightclan when she dies, Because if i'm right it's the dark forest.She also never touchs darkclan cats because she finds they do not taste good.(She started eating a already dead one as a pup.Bleck.)As a pup She had met another wolf who tried to kill her.That made her belive all the animals here where bad.Her parents also where abuseive so,She became mad at her parents.She kills others to kill her anger, but it's always filled again.She was raised learning that anything in her territory is her food, even other wolves.She uses the clan territories as her own.
RP Sample-nightmare walked into wolfclan camp.The night covered her she grabed a elk than padded away softly.She walked to thunderclan territory.She ate than walked to the camp for juciey desert.She padded into the warriors den, snaped a cat's neck.She ate him in the clearing.Nightmare yawned.Walking to darkclan territory to go to sleep.That night she slept in a decaying log.

Duuude... She Reminds me of Cinderamon... (From a dream)... Though... Cinderamon hated everything... xDDD

*points to sentences and fumes at Capitalization, Grammer, Fragments, Run-ons, ext*

theachers pet!!!
It's hard ok, my spacebar is broken is took me 35 minutes to write that!!!!

....

Wow...

I've been called Teacher's Pet a lot today...

xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

And, So?

That doesn't mean you can't CAPITOLIZE your letters... For Proper Nouns and Begining words...

That because you act like one.

sorry for double posting but can someone approve this soon!!!

Nope... xD

I dun do Wolves... xD

And, if your space bar is broken, then why can you space your words?

The button is of so I have to use a little button no bigger than this O.Can you tell Flintt about this bio please.

Nope... Cause Al-Chan is really supposed to approve Wolves...

Okay, this has to be said right now.

Your Spelling... It's...

horrible.

Rouge~ Rogue

And if you can space all these other words... Then you can space between new sentences.

I hate cats.I eat cats.Except for DarkClan cats.Blech.

That doesn't even look right.

*points to Warrior||Raindapple too*

I think she's been working with Leo's Heartbreaker!

Wait what! *cracks knuckles at Cinnamon and Raindapple*

You must be lustin' for a bustin'
It's Clobberin' time!
I'M ROCKY BALBOA
*does the hussle*

.... What is it with spelling!!!!!!

WHOLLY PIECAKES.

The colors are too unnatural.

........

If I went xFlamex on you guys, you'd be crying.

But I guess I'll do it anyways.

Name: nightmare <---- CAPITALIZE

Gender:female <---- CAPITALIZE
Affiliate:rouge but goes anywhere she wants. <--- She is a rogue, but goes wherever she wants. No, she cannot go anywhere she wants.
Rank:wolf-rouge <-- AGAIN, capitalize! One, wolf is not a rank, and neither is rogue.
Looks:she has a unuselly large body and tail

(large and sinster looking right.) <--- How unnaturally large? How long is her tail? We need to know these things to avoid power play! What has made her bigger and stronger then any normal wolf? Plus, that color is MUCH TOO UNNATURAL. Change it to something a normal wolf would have. AND, those claws are way too freaking long. Shorten them, or just... no... You have a lot of work to do.

Personality: evil,hates cats,loves killing,kills everything in way.soft spot for pups. <--- WAY TOO SHORT. You must capitalize! More than one run-on sentence, please. WE GET THAT SHE IS EVIL. Plus, if she is so evil, why does she have such a soft spot for kits? And, you can't gaurantee she can kill whatever's in her way. Have you thought about all of WolfClan ganging up on her? Eh? EH?!
Birth: rouge <--- CAPITALIZE.
History:she was born far from every thing,yet wandered as a pup.she found herself near the clan territories and stayed there.noone knows much about her though.she will most likely go to nightclan when she dies.she never touchs darkclan cat because she finds they do not taste good.(she started eating a already dead one as a pup.bleck.) <---- GOD DANGIT. Capitalize, please! Yes, we do not know much about her, but YOU do. Just because you put everything that happened in her life in this bio doesn't mean that every rp character will know everything. Please, makes some stuff plural, fix your punctuation. If you fill her history out a bit more, it will make this bio a whole lot better. It would explain WHY she is so evil.
RP Sample-nightmare walked into wolfclan camp.she heard growls of wolves calling her a deman.she simply walked up to a kill pile, and dragged a elk off.she went to thunderclan's territory to eat it.when she fininshed she walked to thunderclans camp for dessart.a nice plump cat.she licked her chomps at the thought.she walked right on in."Guess who"she barked.than as they scatterd she found one to eat.she chaught it quickly.than ate in in front of the camp.than headed of to find a place to sleep. <--- What. The. Bloody. Heck? So much powerplay. Too many spelling mistakes.

I love the idea of this character, and that picture just melts my heart. :3 But the bio is suckish. No, I will not be accepting any time soon until this is fixed. The end.

I am a bit bipolar.

*nods*
*pats Star on the back*
Good job my anal friend.
xD

A-a-anal friend? o.o

*pats*
The first step is realizing your problem.

....XD

*cough*

Quoted from Rules
6. No Being Mean

*cough*

Not only I have demonstrated being mean on bios. >> *looks at Kyu* Plus, outbursts that are this bad rarely happen.

Ok i wll fix it.PLEASE WAIT A MOMENT!!!!

Lawlz... OOO... I like the new Pic... xD I love Black, Scary Wolves... They are fun to Role Play... xDDD

*pats Al-Chan on the back, too*
Great job! I have been too lazy to do something like that! xDDD You and I would make great English Teachers... :3

Star would beat up the kids who would misbehave...XD

XD
I know, right? I swear, me and the two other kids in my language arts class are like.. the masters!

xDDDD I'd be English and Japanese Teacher, and so would Al-Chan! WEEEEEEEEEEE~!