Frosteyes: Warrior of WindClan
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Frosteyes: Warrior of WindClan
by *Nana* (: Mon Feb 15, 2010 6:38 pm
Name: Frosteyes
Gender: she-cats
Age:12 moons
Affiliate:WindClan
Rank:warrior
Looks:
Personality: She has a bad attitude and she loves to play around. She also loves to run across the moorland. Her favorite prey to eat is a squirrel. She's very bouncy and can get along with almost everyone.
Birth: WindClan
History:She has no brother or sister, they were killed by a monster. She was found in the moorland of WindClan by a fellow warrior. She had a broken paw that healed quickly because she was so young. She decided to become a warrior of WindClan!
RP Sample:
Frosteyes stalked through the tall grass, scanning the undergrowth for any sign of what could be prey. She directed her ears to the east and saw a fat, cream colored rabbit nibbling stalks of juicy grass. She stalked forward, hoping the rabbit wouldn't hear her. She got about a fox-length away from the animal when it startled and ran, she gave chase. She desperately followed it, under struggling bushes,and over scarce rocks. She gained on it, eventually pouncing on it, delivering the final hunter's blow.
Gender: she-cats
Age:12 moons
Affiliate:WindClan
Rank:warrior
Looks:
Personality: She has a bad attitude and she loves to play around. She also loves to run across the moorland. Her favorite prey to eat is a squirrel. She's very bouncy and can get along with almost everyone.
Birth: WindClan
History:She has no brother or sister, they were killed by a monster. She was found in the moorland of WindClan by a fellow warrior. She had a broken paw that healed quickly because she was so young. She decided to become a warrior of WindClan!
RP Sample:
Frosteyes stalked through the tall grass, scanning the undergrowth for any sign of what could be prey. She directed her ears to the east and saw a fat, cream colored rabbit nibbling stalks of juicy grass. She stalked forward, hoping the rabbit wouldn't hear her. She got about a fox-length away from the animal when it startled and ran, she gave chase. She desperately followed it, under struggling bushes,and over scarce rocks. She gained on it, eventually pouncing on it, delivering the final hunter's blow.
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Re: Frosteyes: Warrior of WindClan
by LEN KAGAMINE Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:23 pm
You really gotta start making your personalities and history's longer... Sentence and length of sentences wise... >>
I'm not approving this until you make each sentence complete, and you make them more lengthy... >>
I'm not approving this until you make each sentence complete, and you make them more lengthy... >>
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Re: Frosteyes: Warrior of WindClan
by *Nana* (: Tue Feb 16, 2010 4:05 pm
I made the sentences longer.
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Re: Frosteyes: Warrior of WindClan
by LEN KAGAMINE Tue Feb 16, 2010 5:46 pm
Finally...
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