Cloudstorm and Neddleclaw the Rouges !

Name: Cloudstorm
Gender: Male
Age: 84 Moons (7 years)
Affiliate: Rouge
Rank:
Cat-
Wolf-

Looks:

Personality: Fierce and cunning, this is a cat you wouldn't want to meet in battle. Is cut out for the leadership role among the rouges.
Birth: Was born a rouge, joined DarkClan, then became a rouge again.

History: All his life, he was very attached to his mother. Back then he was called Snow. She had tought him how to hunt and fight, and she tought him about StarClan, and how it watches over the everything. Then Snow asked why they were not part of a clan, and his mother said she was once part of ShadowClan, but she was kicked out for killing a clanmate that she believed had killed her former kits. Snow thought it was unfair that StarClan had let that happen, but he kept that thought to himself. But one day, while he and his mother were out hunting, his mother was killed by a badger, while Snow had managed to get away. Snow was crushed, and blamed his tragic loss on StarClan. A few years later, after living by himself as a rouge, Snow heard of DarkClan, the Clan that didn't believe in StarClan. He thought DarkClan was his chance for revenge on StarClan, so he joined, and was renamed Snowpelt. While in DarkClan, Snowpelt tried to convince the leader to attack other Clans' medicine cats, for they were the closest, killable link to StarClan. When the DarkClan leader refused, Snowpelt left the Clan and became a rouge, changing his name to Cloudstorm, because clouds covered the stars, and the stars were now his enemies. To this day, he lives with his sidekick, Neddleclaw, plotting revenge.
RP Sample: Snow lifted his nose into the air and scented the unmistakeable scent of mouse. He crouched in the bushes, and spotted a small, brown body sitting in between two tree roots. Snow stalked forward, keeping light on his paws, and sprang when he was close enough to the mouse. He killed it in one swift bite, and buried it to collect later. Then he started searching for his mother, when he heard a terrible screech. He raced toward the source of the sound to find his mother getting torn up by a badger. Her blood lay in pools around the badger, and she was laying limp in the beast's paws. The sight horrified Snow, and he dashed away as fast as he could away from the badger.

Name: Neddleclaw
Gender: Male
Age: 84 Moons (7 years)
Affiliate: Rouge
Rank:
Cat-
Wolf-

Looks
[b]Personality: Incredibly strong, yet not so bright. Is very loyal to his leader.
Birth: Born a rouge.

History: Has always hated StarClan because he believes they deserted him. When he heard that Cloudstorm shared his beliefs, they joined together in a strong partnership.

Please approve or disapprove my bio! (Although I prefer approve )

You said no one would want to meet Cloudstorm is battle...not to burst your bubble, but 108 moons is really old and they wouldn't be good at battling.

Alright I changed it to 84 Moons.

Approved.

Yay! Thank you!