Kits should never be out alone....

"CROOKEDKIT!!!!!!" Creamfur yowled, rushing over, she tryed to push Nightfeather aside, and sniffed her Kit. She really was gone. "Crookedkit" Creamfur wisperd, as she lay down beside her Kit.

Lillyflower padded over to Lynxpaw "thankyou" Lillyflower meowed "you were very brave". Lillyflower dropped her head, wishing Crookedkit a good Life in StarClan.

Honeypaw padded out of the Bushes, when she saw Crookedkit, Honeypaw dropped her head. She had felt very close to the Kit, becuase Crookedkit's Mother and Honeypaw's Mother, were very close.

"You can mourn her on the run." growled Frostheart, his cold and depressing eyes blazing with frozen fire. "You're no long ThunderClan. You threw that all away when you left the clan." he finished, flicking his tail at Creamfur. "I better not see you at camp, or I'll kill you myself." the barbed ended threat was swallowed up by darkness as Frostheart faded into the night.

Creamfur knew she was not welcome, so she stayed with Crookedkit while she could.

Lynxpaw dipped her head at the Thunderclan queen before padding respectfully over to Crookedkit's body again. She nudged Creamfur comfortingly and bowed her head and touched the kits fur with her nose. "Young one, we all know you were to young to die, you shouldn't have left the clans so early. May you find your way safely to Starclan." She closed her eyes as she mewed the words to the apprentice.

Creamfur looked up at Lynxpaw and meowed "thankyou, for saving her as much as you could, and for eavrything else", then Creamfur looked to Nightfeather "where shall we put her?" Creamfur meowed.

Lynxpaw looked down at the kit. "It wasn't enough to save her," She mewed closing her eyes then after a minuter or so she opened her eyes. She looked at Crookedkit's tortoiseshell fur. She realised that the kit was in fact breathing and very much alive! "Nightfeather Creamfur!"

Creamfur looked up and gasped "she's in a Coma" Creamfur meowed.
"I'v hured of these things, but I never thought it could really happen" Creamfur meowed, as she started to lick her Kit's Fur.

"A coma?" Nightfeather mewed in disbelief and edged his way towards the kit wondering wether he had to be happy or not.

Frostheart drove his claws into the kits stomach, splitting it open. "Now it's misery of having failures for parents is over."

OCC: GO AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please.

Creamfur sighed and then picked up her Kit and meowed "where shall we put her?", Creamfur meowed.

OOC: Noes! Iron is makin this thred worth reading X3

OOC: Yeah, he is! And the kid is in a COMA! THERE'S NO WAY TO SAVE HIM! HE'LL JUST STARVE TO DEATH! LET THE MAN CUT OPEN THE KIT'S STOMACH AND ENTERTAIN US! Pwease? :3

Really Lillyflower... you can't deny the laws of science on this. D:

OCC: CROOKEDKIT IS A GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She wil LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

OOC: How will SHE live then, huh? ARE THEY GOING TO WAKE HER UP CAUSE IT'S NOT HAPPINING! And anyways. Kits in coma's don't GO TO STARCLAN!

Yeah that was before we thought of the plottage of her going into a coma,

OOC: She's going to die so she might as well just stay there. I mean, I don't even know how she'll even survive. =/

ooc- Overuse of exclamation points much?

OOC: Isn't that aginst rules?

OCC: I'm sorry, I'm just angry that people are trying to change the Plot when Me and Cheese know what we will Post and what is going to happen :( :( .

OOC: Well, it's just that your plot, is flawed, Lilly. There is... no way that the kit can come out of this alive.

OCC: There is a small chance, and that chance is going to happen. Can someone close this Thread now, please???.