Redwhisker's confusion... (Private but open to rain if u want.)

Redwhisker padded through the forest. Scents of many creatures drifted around him like mist. But he was not hunting.
Redwhisker felt lonelyness in his heart. Like nothing he had felt before. The cat he loved, did not love him. He was upset. He had helped her in the battle when her belly was sliced open. He had supported her and loved her for a long time but she still thought about, him. He was gone now. He probally wouldn't come back. Raindapple was Redwhiskers purpous in life, but now that she had shown she did not love him, it felt like he had no oxygen.

OOC:Raindapple is,like,just a few foxlengths away from him,but they dun know that the other one is there,okay?

Raindapple paced the forest floor,her blue eyes dull with grief and pain. Don't be so selfish. Your hurting Redwhisker more than you know. she scolded herself,hanging her head.

Redwhisker scenced something but he was to griefstricken to care.
He leapt onto his rocky ledge where he had had his accident. Being careful where he sat he turned his head to the sky.
"Why!? Why Starclan did you do this to me? She does not love me!" Redwhisker yowled.
"Why?" he said quietly as he looked down at his paws. His heart burned and his face was damp like he was in the rain.
"Why?" He whispered.

(Ok)

"Redwhisker?"Raindapple called. She'd heard his grief-stricken wails and was almost tempted to stay hidden. But she knew that she had caused this.

OOC: Redwhisker is such a.... Ugh! DO I HAVE TO SAY IT! Raindapple, I don't knwo WHAT you see in him. *pulls ears in frustration*

OOC:XD *Idk either,but love knows no bounds. DANG I AM REALLY CHEESY ALL OF A SUDDEN!!! LOL

Redwhisker didn't look up but he pricked his ears in surprise. Not happy surprise.
"What do you want? He asked calmly.

"I,uh,was just hunting."Raindapple lied,her eyes peeking out of a fern. Sorrow radiated off her pelt. "I am so sorry that I've hurt you."she whispered,her voice shaking.

OOC: It's like Cinderella picking one of her little mice (Redwhisker), instead of prince charming (Leopardstrike).

OOC: Oh yeah, definitely. Charming saves her and then proposes. Then she accepts an leaves to tell her parents or whoever and she falls in love with the ugly peasant/troll in the village. XD

(This is private so could you please stop posting here. Its says in the rules to obey topic titles. This one says: 'Redwhisker's confusion... (Private but open to raindapple if u want.)' are any of you raindapple??? now please stop posting.)

Redwhisker looked up fully.
"No. I was stupid. I love you but it was my fault though that I chose someone to love that was already in love. I am sorry. I caused this. You have done nothing. If you love Leopardstrike more then you shall run off and have kits with him but I was hoping we would have kits." He said lowering his head again. He sat down and looked at his paw.
"But I was wrong!" He said looking at her suddenly with an edgy feirceness in his voice. But how could he blame her? It was his fault.
"I am sorry." He said as he glanced over his shoulder one more time and leapt of the rock down into the wilderness.

"Redwhisker!"Raindapple cried,racing after him best she could,hobbling with her bad shoulder. "Redwhisker wait!"

Redwhisker turned around.
"I know you don't love me but I want you to know," He paused what he had said had caused him great pain,
"I love you." He collapsed into a sobbing heap.
"Your the only cat I have and will ever love." He sobbed quietly.

OOC: That just means I can't RP, but I can criticize. XD

Redwhisker is a little too... soft to me. I mean, he was going to run away and now he's crying on the ground. Cheese, I would make him a little tougher if I were you.

Nightfeather wrote:(This is private so could you please stop posting here. Its says in the rules to obey topic titles. This one says: 'Redwhisker's confusion... (Private but open to raindapple if u want.)' are any of you raindapple??? now please stop posting.)

ooc- You are retarded if you think this mod and admin will follow THAT rule. We post wherever we want. It probably isn't a good idea to a) try to tell a staff member what to do b) make a staff member angry. SO this is what I THINK:

POST POST POST POSTY POSTIEEEEEEEEEEEE

I just posted.

Raindapple wailed aloud. "I'm so sorry! Redwhisker,I never ment to hurt anyone!"

(Yes River I understand but do you have to post here. Do you have a special porpous?)

"I have told you Raindapple, it's my fault!" He said firmly. But in his mind he was saying, 'You hurt me!' He got up from where he lay. He turned and padded away and before Raindapple could follow he announced,
"I need to be alone!" and padded away.

Raindapple wrote:OOC:XD *Idk either,but love knows no bounds. DANG I AM REALLY CHEESY ALL OF A SUDDEN!!! LOL

(Excuse me for intruding, but that is so, so true. XD)

(No problem starflight. Atleast someone is Excusing themself

(I'm entering.)

(I'm leaving.) NYEH

Raindapple wailed softly and just sat in the rain,cold water soaking into her fur. Her eyes were clouded over with grief and pain,and she looked down at her muddy paws,ashamed.

Redwhisker kept walking. He spotted a rcok up ahead and he leapt to the top. He looked over the forest. From where he stood he could see Raindapple. Lightning flashed behind him. He watched Raindapple as she just sat in the rain. Without thinking he bounded down from his rock over to her side. He sat beside her in the rain and licked her ear.
"I am sorry but I once again say, you must chose me or Leopardstrike. I can not love you if you do not love me." He whispered.

Redwhisker kept walking. He spotted a rcok up ahead and he leapt to the top. He looked over the forest. From where he stood he could see Raindapple. Lightning flashed behind him. He watched Raindapple as she just sat in the rain. Without thinking he bounded down from his rock over to her side. He sat beside her in the rain and licked her ear.
"I am sorry but I once again say, you must chose me or Leopardstrike. I can not love you if you do not love me." He whispered.

"But I love you both!"Raindapple wailed,her eyes shining with sadness. "How can I only choose one of you?"her voice shook and she looked at the ground.

"Well I can't love you if you love him still. I am sorry Raindapple, if you can't chose then I must leave you." It choked him to say something but 'if you love something, you should let it go.' He stepped back.